These are my best words - Redux Ockham
Before, I used other words.
I spoke them clearly,
directly,
in my own voice.
I did not resort to metaphor,
or simile.
Though, I used rhyme,
and may have tried to use satire.
That being said,
all things considered,
notwithstanding,
taking into account,
regional cultural understandings,
of words, and phrases.
It was still a simple poem.
It was, a little, pessimistic.
This one. Is not.
These are my best words.
And are the ones I wish,
to fall alseep upon.
Much as I did,
when a younger man,
to the haunting words,
“Remember when you were young,
you shone like the son.”
It was being sung,
so it may have been sun.
I’ve not really begun,
to be the sun,
born to the son,
of the son,
of a Seller of Fruit.
That seemed to matter.
When I was younger,
Now?
There’s a look in my eye.
Black Holes in the Sky.